Never knew fate
had a problem with me,
Until it told you
Your brother would
be he,
Scared by this I
pleaded not to go,
But there I was in
your hands
As soon as it gave
me a blow.
Looking into your
eyes,
I did realize,
There was some
mischief cooking
In your brain of a
grape size.
Time flew by, flew
very fast
You started going
school,
And I was in my cradle,
Listening to the
music of Liverpool.
Seeing all my
pampering
I was sure you
were burning.
And then you give
a wicked smile,
And the tables
turn in a while.
My day wasn’t
complete without fighting with you,
But just wanted to
say I still love you.
With all those
fights I got to know one thing,
Your nails are the
deadliest…painful than a bee-sting.
Saying that I
still don’t understand
Were always those half cooked dosas….
preplanned?
At times you cook
better than Mom
I just admitted to
that….oh com-on.
Soon my world was
shattered,
The very news of
you leaving left me battered.
It was only after
so many years,
That I could find
myself in tears.
All my emotions
were taken for a toss,
Cause you went
away leaving me at a cross.
Seeing your
pictures at a gaze,
I’m sitting here
with my mind in a haze.
How good it would
be,
If I could relive
those good old days.
Superb mama👌
ReplyDeleteThank you Ravi...:-)
DeleteI did not know.How emotional and poetic you are and I came to know only after reading this.
ReplyDeleteNow this is what you know about me after travelling for 4 years :-D
DeleteKirak undi mama
ReplyDeletethank u mama
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DeleteNice one bro. Keep up and keep doing the stuff...
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ReplyDeleteThank you ^_^
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ReplyDeleteHope u could relive those old good days..my buddy!!! ..nice one.
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DeleteElegant work bro..
ReplyDeleteThank you..
DeleteI love you 😘 N i miss u soo much😭
ReplyDeleteIt's too good abhi!!!
ReplyDeleteThank You Manisha :)
DeleteAwww.Great job abi!! Keep going
ReplyDeleteThank You Ratnaaa😄
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ReplyDeleteThank You Prasana
DeleteI wish i had a brother to write such poem about me.. Simple words yet deep.. Loved it😍😍
ReplyDeleteI'm sure, he would have written about...How a sister shouldn't be like 😆
DeleteOnly a very few people realise the deepness of life!! And it takes even more efforts and courage to combine and put it as words!! You rock ;)
ReplyDeleteThank you akshaya😁...a very few people realise the deepness of life...true, and the same goes with you as I have read all of your blogs.
DeleteToo good abhi ���� And yes her nails are the deadliest �� And she cooks amazing ���� love you Moni and miss youuu ❤️
ReplyDeleteAwww 😘😘😘
DeleteThank You Radha😊...Yes, she cooks really well and I don't even remember how many times I had to get these TT injections beacuse of her nails😆
DeleteToo good abi!😍 Moni is really lucky to have uou💖❤️
ReplyDeleteThank You Rooopaaa...and yes she's very lucky to have me😎
DeleteBeautifully expressed , the bond of brother sister is so unique n most cherished part of childhood
ReplyDeleteThank You Koral😃...It is the most cherished part and she's the only enemy you can't live without😉
DeleteGood one shek!! Except intro lines('coz she is younger sis).... All other rhymeee makes me cherish with my sis ��
ReplyDelete"never knew fate had a problem with me until it makes me join SNIST n form babba with you" hehe..
Thank You Ravia😊 and those first few lines....Your sister might have had the same feeling😅
DeleteBeautifully expressed! I never know the bond of brother and sister as i dont have a sister. But i could still feel the bond that u guys have through your poem. Btw You are way more expressive than Monisha..:-)
ReplyDeleteHaha you think so😂...what to do, I'm not as lucky as you are...I have sister...and that too a girl like Monisha😓 😝
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